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Writing IVa: Portfolio
0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals
Book reviews	0	0	5	5	2	6	18
Blog posts	1	0	30	7	18	12	68
Words	165	0	2874	1665	2287	1186	8177
TOTAL	---	---	---	---	---	---	---

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1.0. Movie Reviews

1.1. Showcase [+ links]	Dates on blog (yy.mm.dd)	¶	W	Notes
Toy Story	07.12.29	3	186	Every toys are so cute♪I enjoyed this movie.
Kill Bill	07.12.29	8	399	It was too grotesque for me…
Romeo and Juliet	07.12.03	8	593	I like this movie very much!
Mrs Doubtfire	07.12.04	5	244	It was funny.
School of Rock	07.12.18	4	224	I choose School of Rock..
Shrek	07.12.18	8	585	I choose Shrek.
Totals	---	36	2007	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

1.2. Best Movie Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those movie reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

“Romeo and Juliet”

I feel this is my best movie review this semester. Because I could write person introduction well and I think I could write my impression well than other movie reviews.

This is the longest movie Review than other reviews. That is why I selected this review.

2.0. Comments

Total number of comments (use dashboard)
Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Total
	1	0	5	1	0	3	10

Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Qualities of comments*[*]
Any one of your movie reviews	Romeo and Juliet	07.12.03	Very good!
When did you respond to those comments?	---	08.01.30	---
How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	I comment to her blog too.
Any of your other posts*	KILL BILL	07.10.29	Good.
When did you respond to those comments?	---	08.01.30	---
How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	I comment to her blog too.

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

In a sidebar.

Additional reflections on comments

Giving: to Haruka, “Wonka’s chocolate” It is famous movie Charlie and the chocolate factory’s chocolate. I ate it before too, and I also like this movie. Haruka’s blog is very cute, so I like her brog!!

Receiving: “lunch”　I made lunch for my boyfriend, and 2 friends give me comments. It makes me so happy! They said to me “It looks delicious♪”

3.0. Book Reviews

	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	Romeo and Juliet	07.10.17	222	0
2-02	A Christmas Carol	07.10.17	299	0
2-03	Go, Lovely Rose and The Other Story	07.10.17	65	0
2-04	Happy Christmas!	07.10.30	209	0
2-05	Princess Diana	07.10.30	438	0
2-06	Love Actually	07.11.14	456	0
2-07	The Oscars	07.11.14	101	0
2-08	Notting Hill	07.11.21	198	0
2-09	Cinderella and Other Stories	07.11.21	88	0
2-10	Shakespeare His Life And Plays	07.11.21	173	0
2-11	The Princess Diaries	07.12.11	51	0
2-12	The Godfather	07.12.18	10	0
2-13	Halloween horror	08.01.08	129	0
2-14	Halloween	08.01.08	144	0
2-15	Rip Van Winkle and The Legend of Sleepy Hollow	08.01.08	122	0
2-16	EMMA	08.01.08	119	0
2-17	Winnie the Pooh	08.01.08	91	0
2-18	Drippy	08.01.25	135	0
---	---	TOTALS:	3050	0

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

“Love Actually”

I select this book review. Because I liked this story and I read again and again. I think I could write my review better than other book review. That’s why I selected this book review.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

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I had not enough time to blog, but writing my every day in using English is interesting. I think I became good at writing my opinion than before. I can use blog as a diary, so I think blog is very useful!!　

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

I suggest that you continue your blog with the intention of the diary. I’m not going to write a good sentence and think that I had better write that I hit obediently.

WEI 3

How many words
in week 1(on 11-17 in April):0 words
in week 2(on 18-24 in April):216 words
in week 3(on 25, April- 1,May):116 words
in week 4(on 2-8 in May): 209words
in week 5(on 9-15 in May): 0 words
in week 6(on 16-22 in May): 427words
in week 7(on 23-29 in May): 43 words
in week 8(on 30 in May-5 in June): 75 words
in week 9(on 6-12 in June): 258
in week 10(on 13-19 in June):0
in week 11(on 20-26 in June): 2050
in week 12(on 27 in June-3 in July): 0
in week 13(on 4-10 in July): 1603
in week 14(on 11-17 in July): 0
in week 15(on 18-24 in July):1852
Total words up to this point: words 6876

How many posts
in week 1: 0
in week 2: 3
in week 3: 4
in week 4: 7
in week 5: 0
in week 6: 4
in week 7: 3
in week 8: 1
in week 9: 7
in week 10: 0
in week 11: 14
in week 12: 0
in week 13: 8
in week 14: 0
in week 15: 25
total posts up to this point: 76

Are all your posts labeled? Yes
Do you have a label element in your sidebar? Yes
Do you have a picture in your self intro? Yes
Do you have a feed in your sidebar? No
Do you have a list of links that feature links to 4 other student's blogs? Yes
Do you have Kumamoto Links in sidebar? No
Do you have other links in sidebar? Yes
Do you have reviews on Amazon(linked to from blog)? No
Do you have listmania lists on Amazon(linked to from blog)? No
Do you have any wiki or similar contributions(linked to from blog)? No
Do you have advanced media(Slideshare, Bubbleshare,etc.)? Yes

Link to your book reviews here
Book Review 1-1 ...91 words
Book Review 1-2 ...127 words
Book Review 1-3 ...80 words
Book Review 1-4 ...167 words
Book Review 1-5 … 156 words
Book Review 1-6 … 111 words
Book Review 1-7 …158 words
Book Review 1-8 …106 words
Book Review 1-9 … 183 words
Book Review 1-10 … 229 words
Book Review 1-11 … 144 words
Book Review 1-12 … 135 words
Book Review 1-13 … 187 words
Book Review 1-14 … 117 words
Book Review 1-15 … 111words

Link to your essays posted to your blog here
Essay 01 ... 250 words
Essay 02 ... 261 words
Essay 03 ... 257 words
Essay 04 ... 268 words
Essay 05 ... 284 words
Essay 06 … 412 words

How many posts
with link(s): 0
with 1 picture/photo: 47
How many complex posts(at least 2 links and 1 photo): 3

Comments:
How many comments are there on your blog? 8
Have you made at least 8 comments? Yes
Please link to the 8 comments you think are best.

Erina’s blog
・coconuts
・tandori chicken and nan bread

Tomomi’s blog
・my pet
・UFOs
・Look!
Manami’s blog
・goal!!
・7 months anniverssary

RIna’s blog
・hot sweet!

Please link to your best non book review, non essay blog post. Why do you think it is your best?
My best review is 1-10 Titanic
Because I like Titanic story I have ever read. It was easy to read.

My best essay is Essay 06 Movie
Because I could write this essay very well and this is the longest essay I have ever written.

Please link to your best comment on another blog. Why do you think it is best?
Erina's blog (coconuts)
Because I like this blog and this coconuts candy was very delicious! Thank you Mr.Tomei!

WEI 2

How many words
in Week1(on 11-17 in April):0 words
in week 2(on 18-24 in April):261 words
in week 3(on 25, April- 1,May):113 words
in week 4(on 2-8 in May): 214 words
in week 5(on 9-15 in May): 0 words
in week 6(on 16-21 in May): 295 words
in week 7(on 22-29 in May): 34 words
in week 8(on 30-31, May- 1-6 in June): 332 words
in week 9(on 7-14 in June): 0
in week 10(on 15-22 in June):1460
Total words up to this point: 2709 words

How many posts
in week 1: 0
in week 2: 3
in week 3: 4
in week 4: 3
in week 5: 0
in week 6: 3
in week 7: 3
in week 8: 6
in week 9: 0
in week 10:10

total posts up to this point: 32

Are all your posts labeled? Yes
Do you have a label element in your sidebar? Yes
Do you have a picture in your self intro? Yes
Do you have a feed in your sidebar? No
Do you have a list of links that feature links to 4 other student's blogs? Yes
Do you have Kumamoto Links in sidebar? No
Do you have other links in sidebar? Yes
Do you have reviews on Amazon(linked to from blog)? No
Do you have listmania lists on Amazon(linked to from blog)? No
Do you have any wiki or similar contributions(linked to from blog)? No
Do you have advanced media(Slideshare, Bubbleshare,etc.)? No

Link to your book reviews here

Book Review 1-1 ...91 words
Book Review 1-2 ...127 words
Book Review 1-3 ...80 words
Book Review 1-4 ...167 words

Link to your essays posted to your blog here

Essay 01 ... 250 words
Essay 02 ... 261 words
Essay 03 ... 257 words
Essay 04 ... 268 words
Essay 05 ... 284 words

How many posts
with link(s): 0
with 1 picture/photo: 13
How many complex posts(at least 2 links and 1 photo): 3

Comments:
How many comments are there on your blog? 6
Have you made at least 8 comments?
No. I have made at 3 comments.
Please link to the 8 comments you think are best.
Erina's blog (coconuts)
Tomomi's blog (my pet)
Manami's blog (goal!)

Please link to your best non book review, non essay blog post. Why do you think it is your best?
My best review is Marshall and the White Star.
Because this story is very cute and the illustration is also pretty!!
My best essay is My favorite subject.
Because my photo album makes me happy!!

Please link to your best comment on another blog. Why do you think it is best?
Erina's blog (coconuts)
Because I like this blog and it was very delicious! Thank you Mr.Tomei!

WEI 1

How many words
in Week 1:0
in Week 2:268
in Week 3:273
in Week 4:161
Total words up to this point:702

How many posts
in Week 1:0
in Week 2:4
in Week 3:10
in Week 4:3
Total posts up to this point:18

Are all your posts labeled?:Yes
Do you have a label element in your sidebar?:Yes
Do you have a picture in your self intro?:No
Do you have a feed in your sideber?:No
Do you have a list of links that that feature links to 4 other students' blog?:Yes
Do you have Kumamoto Links in sidebar?:No
Do you have other links in sideber?:No
Do you have reviews on Amazon?:No
Do you have listmania lists on Amazon?:No
Do you have any wiki or similar contributions?:No
Do you have advanced media?:No