2008年2月4日月曜日
2008年1月30日水曜日
♥ WEI ♥
Writing IVa: Portfolio
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, and Words
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Months | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 01 | Totals |
Book reviews | 0 | 0 | 5 | 5 | 2 | 6 | 18 |
Blog posts | 1 | 0 | 30 | 7 | 18 | 12 | 68 |
Words | 165 | 0 | 2874 | 1665 | 2287 | 1186 | 8177 |
TOTAL | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
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1.0. Movie Reviews
1.1. Showcase [+ links] | Dates on blog | ¶ | W | Notes |
07.12.29 | 3 | 186 | Every toys are so cute♪I enjoyed this movie. | |
07.12.29 | 8 | 399 | It was too grotesque for me… | |
07.12.03 | 8 | 593 | I like this movie very much! | |
07.12.04 | 5 | 244 | It was funny. | |
07.12.18 | 4 | 224 | I choose | |
07.12.18 | 8 | 585 | I choose Shrek. | |
Totals | --- | 36 | 2007 | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
1.2. Best Movie Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those movie reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
“Romeo and Juliet”
I feel this is my best movie review this semester. Because I could write person introduction well and I think I could write my impression well than other movie reviews.
This is the longest movie Review than other reviews. That is why I selected this review.
2.0. Comments
Total number of comments (use dashboard) | |||||||
Months | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 01 | Total |
| 1 | 0 | 5 | 1 | 0 | 3 | 10 |
Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) | Qualities of comments*[*] |
Any one of your movie reviews | 07.12.03 | Very good! | |
When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.01.30 | --- |
How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | I comment to her blog too. |
Any of your other posts* | 07.10.29 | Good. | |
When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.01.30 | --- |
How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | I comment to her blog too. |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.
Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
In a sidebar.
Additional reflections on comments
Giving: to Haruka, “Wonka’s chocolate” It is famous movie Charlie and the chocolate factory’s chocolate. I ate it before too, and I also like this movie. Haruka’s blog is very cute, so I like her brog!!
Receiving: “lunch” I made lunch for my boyfriend, and 2 friends give me comments. It makes me so happy! They said to me “It looks delicious♪”
3.0. Book Reviews
| Short titles | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
Example: | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
2-01 | 07.10.17 | 222 | 0 | |
2-02 | 07.10.17 | 299 | 0 | |
2-03 | 07.10.17 | 65 | 0 | |
2-04 | 07.10.30 | 209 | 0 | |
2-05 | 07.10.30 | 438 | 0 | |
2-06 | 07.11.14 | 456 | 0 | |
2-07 | 07.11.14 | 101 | 0 | |
2-08 | 07.11.21 | 198 | 0 | |
2-09 | 07.11.21 | 88 | 0 | |
2-10 | 07.11.21 | 173 | 0 | |
2-11 | 07.12.11 | 51 | 0 | |
2-12 | 07.12.18 | 10 | 0 | |
2-13 | 08.01.08 | 129 | 0 | |
2-14 | 08.01.08 | 144 | 0 | |
2-15 | 08.01.08 | 122 | 0 | |
2-16 | 08.01.08 | 119 | 0 | |
2-17 | 08.01.08 | 91 | 0 | |
2-18 | 08.01.25 | 135 | 0 | |
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--- | --- | TOTALS: | 3050 | 0 |
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).
4.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
“Love Actually”
I select this book review. Because I liked this story and I read again and again. I think I could write my review better than other book review. That’s why I selected this book review.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
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I had not enough time to blog, but writing my every day in using English is interesting. I think I became good at writing my opinion than before. I can use blog as a diary, so I think blog is very useful!!
6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
I suggest that you continue your blog with the intention of the diary. I’m not going to write a good sentence and think that I had better write that I hit obediently.
2008年1月25日金曜日
speakling presentation (゜口゜;)
But I think I did my best♥
like Jonney Depp♥ but I like Tim Burton much better!! He is a famous movie director. I watched all his movies. "Charie and The Chocolate Factory", "Planet of the Apes", "Big Fish", "Sleepy Hollow", "Edward Scissor hands", and so on. Jonney often act in his movies.
In "Sweeney Todd", we can listen to Jonney the singer. He has formed a rock band before, so he is good at singing!! I could enjoy the story too. Murder scenes were so grotesque, but Tim Burton's sensibility and express skill are amazing!(≧ω≦)♥♥
I feel as if I watched the "real movie".
However, I can't recommend this movie who don't like blood.(~ω~;) To these people, I recommend "Charie and The Chocolate Factory" or "Big Fish"♥ (Especially, "Big Fish") Those movies are colorful, and beautiful. However, Tim Burton's work styles are totally different by a movie, so I think it is interesting to watch all his movies.
This story's main character is a drop of water, named "Drippy". He is a little child, but he wants to see a lot of world. Then, he ran away from his home, he went to a long long journey.
He is a little child, so he does not know much words, but he comes to get the word skill by his journey, and he gets a lot of friends. For example, a spider, a grasshopper. Its story is very interesting and easy to understand. In added, I could learn a lot of English skills thorough this book. I recommend this book very much!
2008年1月16日水曜日
20 years old!!
I met many old friends. I took a lot of pictures with them and talked with them. I was very glad.
After the ceremony, I went to uncle’s house and my brothers’ house with my boyfriend. They welcomed us and celebrate me. My cousins gave me a very cute piace. It was made of pearl, shell, and amezist. Thank you very much!! My boyfriend gave me a perfume. It was surprise present★
I wanted it very much, so I was very glad!! Thank you!!
I could have a wonderful day
Nasuca show
I went to Nasuca-ten with my boyfriend on January 14th. Grand arts were very interesting!! I amazed that very much. I didn’t know these grand arts were drawn at desert. These were made of a lot of stone. So, it breaks easily.